A small attempt at poetry...here it goes
Soothingly moon hung in the sky
So strangely beautiful and lovely
Radiantly made my emotions fly
Loving memories were remembered sweetly
The silvery cast spread
swallowing up the dark
looks like a spell which people dread
Arousing feelings unashamedly stark
The luscious fullness
Steals away beauty of stars
Makes us dreamy full with lullness
Love stands out washing away all scars
4 comments:
well my English is not that good to understand ur poem but it sounds good ... hehehe
hi,
too good sweety it was not just a try but real good one..............
nice one! i think for the first attempt it was quite good ....but somehow something was missing.......but beautiful thought indeed and perfect use of language!
keep writing more! :)
Gothic! That's the first word coming to my mind right now. This is kinda like some Within Temptation song...really nice.
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